Sitting alone with my tears,
Shattered and shocked with fear.
Fear, of disrespect and what lies ahead
and no strength to bear.
It was expectedly unexpected
and I never thought it to be like it came,
my failure in my exams,
A grief of silence within me,
and my eyes filled with tears
I lost the battle of the year,
with no strength to bear the pain.
And I now stand with pain,
which could have been a big time gain,
but it was my negligence
that boosted my confidence so high,
that I never knew I need wings to fly such high.
But yet I have another chance,
A golden opportunity to win back the pride I lost
To win the battle I lost and prove am worthy of what I am
And it is this battle which will decide my future, my destiny!!!
Monday, October 22, 2007
My lost pride
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2 comments:
hey u rock man this one's great too
bt may be to soem one who knws u personally
if u cud generalise things
i as a reader try to relate it to maself more better
bt astonishing stuuf from u
keep it up !!!!!
looking forward to readin moree.........
An extremely well written poem.....
The best part is that the poem is not written in a hap-hazzard manner.Very well organized......
The reader can spot gradual progress in every stanza...... simple words yet Good Language....
It's a poem that everyone can understand.......
Emotions expressed in a perfect manner. Not too loud , not too subtle...just perfect.
a very good job done with thoughts......
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