Sitting in the dark i often feel;
No one in this world is made for me,
Crying alone with shattered confidence;
no hope and lost expectancy,
so depressed... feel life has closed its doors for me;
and i m ALONE with no1 left to see me.
Half-an-hour of complete silence;
No words.no acts.. Only thoughts..!!!!
then these thoughts take me far away;
so far... that, to return back i find no way,
Riding on their chariot i reach a place;
Where i find only..'WHY...WHY..WHY' the questions in long race,
will these questions be answered or no..??
the answer may be yes..or maybe.. no,
finally there’s only 1 last hope, which brings me back;
‘ God has given life to make something better out of it…
not just to sit and see the negative part of it ’
just as, any simple thing can be interpreted in two wayzz..
one makes you sad while other makes u gay,
and this is what the answer strikes my mind..,
then back to normal am i..
alright and absolutely fine…..
Thursday, September 20, 2007
sitting alone in dark
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3 comments:
hey playa this poem's like the 6sixes off six balls from you. the emotions of that come off when the person thinking goes into the extremes of dark fears and only loss around him.....but suddenly the self realization of LIFE by Almighty and it being only once......that self motivation carries off the poem to perfection.
an inspiration to buddying youth who tend to get diminished by just one bowl out....give a damn ....the whole life's waiting to be conquered.just lost one....
HATS OFF TO U MAN DHAVAL...YOU'VE MANAGED TO ENSEMBLE A LIFE MOTIVATING STUNNER INTO UR POEM..keep on the good work
This is the best written poem of ur's till date......
Brilliantly framed with emotions.............
U definately deserve all praises for this one.....
Too good dhaval.....
U have written about a phase in life which everyone passes through at least one time......
Waiting to read a poem of your's that will beat this one.....
I have liked this poem of yours immensly,specially this one
your filled with talent.....
futher i can't praise you any more...
your poems speak for themselves.
look around u will find lots of people who loves u always wnts to see u & wants u to needs u as the most beautiful frend in this whole world
nice poem dhaval i think u r turning into a Monotheists or is it just 4 making the poem interesting??
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